Re: second grade girl wrote a composition to "future self": teacher praise, netizens call chicken soup set.
" really sound and profound, the sun is warm, and say a lot of people to middle-aged people want to say! "
however, the eyes of netizens are very bright. We all say:
"is this a collection of chicken soup?"
like this sentence, "would you like to go out of your life, return is still a teenager", as early as 14 years has been sent...
the Chinese teacher awarded the red road here: "this sentence is particularly wonderful", and it is also distressed by the original author.
and "wish you have armour and soft rib", there is a book called this:
"may you work hard all your life and be loved all your life". Well, a very familiar paragraph, from the writer "Changan August" micro-blog:
"the epitaph after hope can be carved on the grave: life is hard, life is loved, want to have, can not get all."
as a senior student, Gao Xiaosong gave his little teacher younger sister a low evaluation.
in fact, even chicken soup collection, but this article is clear and logical, and is worthy of praise. After all, this is just a work of a second year student.
language teacher: a quiet and quiet girl, say a lot of people want to say but can not say
"Zhang Yongyan is a life full of enthusiasm, calm, quiet girl. "Speaking of his favorite student, Wang Yun, the second language teacher of the fourth middle school of the fourth middle school of Beijing, was very impressed. Several times, she used the word" beautiful "in her comments.
Mr. Wang, Zhang Yongyan is very sensitive to writing, reading widely and deeply. A sunny girl who loves life, is good at observing life, has a delicate and keen sense of life, and writes well in everyday writing, especially in prose and essays. She was a super editor in the WeChat class of the class. She also won the first prize of the national micro book review contest with another student in the same grade.
after the explosion of the Internet, Mr. Wang and Zhang Yongyan made a small joke: "chant, you are now a big net red." "Is it?" Zhang Yongyan's face was pleasantly surprised. Then she answered, "don't make a net red. I don't read enough and accumulate less."
Ms. Wang said that Yan Yan grew up in a relaxed and warm family environment. After the explosion, she and her parents have a very peaceful mind. There are two paragraphs in my father's message:
"these two days my family really felt the power of a network, and the children had been addicted to net red." Thanks to the teacher for your child's love here! My child also asked me to convey her gratitude to all those who care and support her. In the face of everyone's praise, chanting words: I can't afford it, I can't afford it. At first we were worried that she was a little fluttering, and I didn't think she was more aware of her own shortcomings, and lamented that her book was too little, and I was very pleased with her dad. "
" (about this article) my mother and I gave both positive and negative evaluations, the positive way is to write new, and write to myself very well. The negative evaluation is that the good words in the article are the quotations and excerpts, but not the plagiarism, but the creativity is not enough. As Helen said in the "if I gave me three days of light", "my composition reflects some of my rough and immature thoughts, but in the meantime it is also mixed with other people glittering ideas and more mature views." "To tell you the truth, I often can't tell which ones are my own thoughts and what I see from them." It is also a familiar feeling to read this article. She listened to our comments and accepted that she would be embarrassed after the spread. I also consoled that her early works were only intellectual training, and by imitating and absorbing, they gradually learned to express what they thought to be accurate. So she was relieved. I think she can bear that. "